Mother, any distance greater than a single span
requires a second pair of hands.
You come to help me measure windows, pelmets, doors,
the acres of the walls, the prairies of the floors.
You at the zero-end, me with the spool of tape, recording
length, reporting metres, centimetres back to base, then leaving
up the stairs, the line still feeding out, unreeling
years between us. Anchor. Kite.
I space-walk through the empty bedrooms, climb
the ladder to the loft, to breaking point, where something
has to give;
two floors below your fingertips still pinch
the last one-hundredth of an inch...I reach
towards a hatch that opens on an endless sky
to fall or fly.
By Simon Armitage
Love, Claire xxx
What a beautiful piece of writing! I would have cried too!
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Thanks Victoria, it is lovely, I thought at first it was American, but when I Googled it, discovered Simon Armitage is a Yorkshire born poet. xxx
DeleteThis is just beautiful Claire and I am so glad you found and put on here, for us...
ReplyDeleteYou got me sniffling...
How thoughtful of your Jacob.
The poem is soo true!
Hi Maria, thank you! Your boy is certainly flying high! xxx
DeleteWhat a lovely thoughtful young man you obviously did a very good job Claire x
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks Su, that's lovely! xx
DeleteHow lovely - you obv have a very good bond with your son. I'm glad I do too and I still cherish a poem he wrote for me aged 6 in which he proclaimed " My mum is grat" but looked like it said "a rat" in his childish writing! We still laugh about it now and he's nearly 20
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It's the little things you cherish the most ... I don't like grand gestures! That is so lovely what your little boy wrote, but also funny. My third son Harry, had a poem published in a book called Playground Poets. It was about me, and one line read "she doesn't care what she wears", ... thanks H! xx
DeleteAh, that's beautiful Claire. Your son is a good boy. xxx
ReplyDeleteThanks LaaLaa ... he is xxx
DeleteOH blimey that made me cry.,.,.,xx
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie, I know, it's very poignant, I fill up every time I read it! xxx
DeleteAwe, How touching..a lovely poem :)
ReplyDeleteMagie x
Thanks Magie, glad you like it! xxx
DeleteOh gosh. All those feelings of my little boy leaving home come flooding back!
ReplyDeleteHello Louise, I know, isn't it awful? I've got 3 more to go through with it yet! xxx
DeleteOh! so lovely Clair I'm not surprised you cried!
ReplyDeleteDon't you just love'em!!!!!
Amanda xx
We do Amanda, we do!! xxx
DeleteWhat I lovely thoughtful son you have. Thanks for sharing the poem, it's beautiful. Get the tissues out. Have a lovely day. Ali x
ReplyDeleteHe has his moments, I must admit! You too Ali, xxx
DeleteOh wow, wiping tears. xx
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely isn't it, Cheryl? Gets me every time I read it! Xxx
DeleteDear Claire
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of that well worn homily namely that children need two things - roots and wings....sniff, sniff....
Your children will never forget their roots and will flourish with their wings....sniff, sniff again...
Aw that's lovely ... Think I've set everyone off today! Xxx
ReplyDeleteAw i feel tearfull reading it ,how lovely ,im dreading the day the children leave home i really am i love having them around ,always feel lost when there not around xxx
ReplyDeleteIt is very sad when they go, but quite often they keep coming back! You just have to be there to pick up the pieces when things don't go quite to plan ...
DeleteHave a lovely day, Claire xxx
Aw how lovely and sweet of him ! and what a lovely poem...Gail x
ReplyDeleteAw thank you Gail, always lovely to have you drop in! Hope yo're ok, enjoy your day, Claire xxx
DeleteOh gosh, went to our first university open day last weekend with my eldest and when we sat down to hear the first talk, I suddenly felt a bit overwhelmed! Excited for him, but a bit sad, too. This definitely strikes a chord....thank you x
ReplyDeleteIt is all a bit overwhelming, we'll have to do it all again next year too! They have their whole lives ahead of them, but the first steps away from home are very big ones xxx
DeleteWhat a sensitive soul he must be! That's what we do though as parents we nurture and protect them with the expectation that one day they will stand on their own too feet, still a bit of a shock though when it happens! Ada :)
ReplyDeleteHello Ada,
DeleteThanks for dropping in! He left home properly a year ago, and don't know about stand on own 2 feet, but think we're getting there! Have to start all over again next year when son number 3 goes to University ... hopefully will be better prepared then xxx
Beautiful....I found it REALLY difficult when my Son left initially for UNI, but it got better. My Son lives in the USA now.....he is incredibly happy and we are so very close and no distance will ever change it, we speak to each other most days ( Thank goodness for IPhones!)H xx
ReplyDeleteI would have cried too! x
ReplyDeleteah bless, that brought a tear to my eye. So sweet, can't believe i have that all to come.
ReplyDeleteIn reply to your comment - yep! full fat haullomi is a must!!! xxxxx